The composition rule I used is 'levels', where my decision on colors affects the shading, the red, green and skin tone of the picture.
The rule bestowed here is "cropping", since I figured the picture is too cluttered with all those books. Though, there's nothing wrong with a lot of books.
Another cropped picture, but not as visible. Just a little modification to draw more attention to the main idea.
What composition rule did you follow the rule?2. What is the subject (be very very specific)?
3. Is it clear to people looking at your photos what the subject is?
4. If you can't very clearly see what the subject is, what could you have done differently?
So the first one has people in it and that is part of the assignment. I wish there were faces, but there is balance and symmetry to this image. The other two, well you just missed the assignment. If you look back at the preview assignment you will see that every photo has people in it. People doing something. Those tell as story of that classroom, that day. Your bottom two pictures are creative and artsy, but do not tell me about academics that day in that classroom. You got lost in the photography and just missed the assignment. If you want to improve your grade and you have other images, please create a new post and publish them there. Let me know via email to regrade and I will. Thanks
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